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Bugs' Unlucky Cousin

by Andy

Final Rating: 4.08. Finished 129 out of 290 entries.

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Animator: Andy

Description: Rabbit stew is on the menu...

This was my first time actually rendering out a scene and added a background. I wanted to do something a little nicer than a playblast for this competition

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: Couples weeks on and off

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

John:

Hard to see any of the mouth movements.

Sabrina Winkel:

I love this one! Great story!

Rachel Col:

I love the camera flip!

Fernando Incetta:

I loved the first shot, it's a good example of visual comedy. But then it gets a little clunky.

Kevin:

Concept is fantastic, animation needs a lot of work

Jim P:

so true haha, no one eats road kill!

John Leland:

nice story here, starts at an interesting point to draw you in right away. that was a good choice. id make the rabbit impact the ground more on the fall, this is a really good animation

Francisco J Ramirez:

staging is lacking, didnt know who was talking at first.

Joel Murphy:

This was shaping up to be great! you had so much potential! and some nice animation too!
I felt like this was about to do something original, then didn't follow through.
I liked the set up: the rabbit hanging upside-down. then you had a nice cut to the captors...
But then when it turned into a hypothetical situation with the rabbit falling in mid air... you lost me!
Feels like you might have run out of time. The first half is solid though. Could make for a great demo piece. I would encourage you to go back and finish what you set up.

Meridith Winterfeld:

He's floating...

Imon Branch:

not enough details