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A trip with teeth

by Julie

Final Rating: 3.97. Finished 81 out of 175 entries.

330 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Julie

Description: Two friends are ending a strange trip. They are exhausted, and the return is made by a very unusual transportation ...

Experience: A year or so

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Kiefer Paulson:

some of the movements happen too quick, like when he helps the 2nd guy to his feet and the spine movement when he says "home"

Eric Raffle:

need to act your scene out to get more realistic movement

John Jefferson:

Pros:

- Animations flow alright.

- Models are ok.

- Background, while I quesiton this, is identifiable.

- Lip Synching is appropriate.

Cons:

- Context of the lines mkae no sense to the background of the scene (For Example, getting him home is apperantly a mouth of a monster according to the scene)

- In the beginning it looks like they are about to fall in the mouth, but then they get up, which is a little odd.