Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
nice idea but your motion is off and it doesn't look like they are speaking ,also your faces needed more facial expressions
Linda Rizo:
It lacks credibility
roy cobn:
where are they?
John Jefferson:
Pros:
- Very well done lighting to indicate they are in a box.
- Good Lipsynching.
- Animation is ok, albeit unnatural.
Cons:
- Animation feels unnatural, especially with the guy on the left that's supposed to be implied to sleep on the dude, when it looks like he just dropped on the dude on purpose to be a meanie.
- Expressions feel forced.
- Head Motions look really bad, like they're bobble heads.
Animator: Bethany Schreiber
Description: Two men stuck in a box.
Unpolished, but time ran out!
Experience: Recently Graduated
Time taken: 2 weeks