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steve11_road_trip_11sec_club

by steven croad

Final Rating: 3.19. Finished 122 out of 175 entries.

276 views including the voting period.

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Animator: steven croad

Description: two characters talking about their road trip

Experience: 8 months as student

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Eric Raffle:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZYTmE5XJhw

Jordan Zambrano:

The overall scenery and placement of characters is good (you could have had the red guy more closer and in the shot more), but you could have went with a different camera angle for the scene because the cyan guy is too far away and you cannot see the red guy's face. I would also recommend more fluid finger movement . I did like how you kept all the characters moving instead of them being stiff or frozen throughout the scene.