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Scared on a hot air balloon!

by Jackie Honorio

Final Rating: 2.47. Finished 161 out of 175 entries.

343 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Jackie Honorio

Description: Two travelers are arriving at the final destination of their trip via hot air balloon, they were thinking that it was going to be really exciting but one of the travelers is scared of the balloon ride while his companion is laughing at him.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Sarah Kenny:

I really liked the range of emotions expressed on your characters' faces, and the lip sync had its moments of being synced up well.
Overall, it felt very unfinished. Parts of the animation appear in slow-mo and others are very fast. There was some popping on the rigs where they were taken out of stepped strait into a drastic change of movement, and the left rig's wrist control does some crazy things.

Eric Raffle:

you do know that your not allowed to add any sound effects before or after the given audio only silence, but as far as animations go it was not ready for the competition and not realistic at all, go to YouTube at watch this link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZYTmE5XJhw

roy cobn:

edited

Justin Jones:

I'm sure the extra sound is not necessary. The poses felt unrealistic, and no effort was done to finish up the animation after the blocking phase.

Maurice Haywood Jr.:

the standing positions needs some work but the scene is cool