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Apologies...My sleepy friend!

by Shekhar N Skr

Final Rating: 4.69. Finished 51 out of 175 entries.

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Animator: Shekhar N Skr

Description: Story of two friends belonging to two different backgrounds. One of them has higher standards and had used some harsh words on his friend. Now he's confessing to his dear friend.....

Experience: 4 months as student

Time taken: 3-4 weeks

Comments:

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Kiefer Paulson:

nice work! a little more attention to arcs and smooth transitions would go a long way. right now you can feel both characters bouncing from keyframe to keyframe, but I like the camera angle and environment.

Jeffrey A Mcrae:

Nice animation, the only thing that stands out to me is in the part "you did get me home and i really appreciate it" the character on the right's head seems to bob a coupe of times in a strange blocky manner.

Joshua Tucker:

The way you did the background animation was very creative. I also liked the way you did the character in the green dozing off. Over all a very good animation.

Jordan Zambrano:

Love the scenery and communication between the characters, but the movement for both are a bit stiff on some parts. I also like the way you animated the fingers for both characters and didn't keep them stiff throughout. The thing that I can't really see well is the facial movements because the camera mostly just shows it from the side. I would recommend at least two different camera angles, one facing at each character and then edit it together to make a much better scene.