Final Rating: 2.05. Finished 168 out of 175 entries.

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Animator: Pulse Shipman

Description: After recovering from an adventure the two friends are exchanging dialogue after returning to the city. before parting ways.

Experience: 4 months

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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Kiefer Paulson:

too stiff... poor camera shots. keep animating!

Kristen Adams:

Your camera angles are really weird and it shoots from one guy to the other rather suddenly. The two guys also have very little movement. I'd work on that.

Casey Howard:

Lip sync really off and the character's bodies are so static I think a brick has more flexibility.

Maurice Haywood Jr.:

get them both in the camera together it might make this better