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by Fredrik

Final Rating: 5.07. Finished 61 out of 211 entries.

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Animator: Fredrik

Description: Middle age man is passing on his knowledge.

Experience: about 3 years

Time taken: three weeks, nights and weekends

Comments:

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Davit Martirosyan:

OMG....)) What's the terrible hand pose in 132 frame?)

philipp seis:

The Characterdesign and the animation are going together really well. I guess there wouldn't even be the need for the dog-gag in the end. Nice !

Derek Stewart:

Cute idea and nice poses!

Greg Stovell:

cool "exactly what you are" movement.
moving holds can use some work.

Aaron Rivera:

I love this one! Nearly every movement leads to the next, while also giving proper emphasis and snappy movements to the audio. The only real problems with this peice are the guys' back. He kinda moves like gumbi and some movement of the hips could've made it feel more natural. I also find the ending rather weird, as he's clearly adressing someone across the room, but suddenly focuses on the dog before ending his sentence. It kinda messes up the otherwise natural acting in the rest of the sequence. Whatever the case, this is a great entry. Nice job!

liltael:

The dog is cute:) Character needs to be more emotional

Mahesh Waran:

#cool #awesome #acting choices :)

Sophie Bracmard:

The position of the front legs of the dog is the end is wrong.

Ayman Mohamed:

too much poses

William Sperling:

Some secondary action on his left foot that is on his right knee would help sell it a bit.