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11 seconds April competiton

by Prasanjay

Final Rating: 5.04. Finished 64 out of 211 entries.

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Animator: Prasanjay

Description: A conversation between an elderly man and a girl.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Philippe Duvin:

Nice acting. The secondary character moves too much and because of the composition, we are distracting form the main acting by it. Your main acting looks sweet, I would have frame the camera more around him. Nice work

Aaron Rivera:

Excellent. The only real issue is that the guy doesn't seem to look at the girl very much. Maybe the pupils need to be repositioned to make her the focus more. Otherwise this is excellent.

April Slocombe:

Movements are good if a little floaty but the poses and lip sync are consistent.