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Inmate's advice

by Al

Final Rating: 4.95. Finished 68 out of 211 entries.

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Animator: Al

Description: A prisoner advises another who is about to be released.

Experience: Not much

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Andrea:

I like the layout a lot. One thing that was somewhat distracting for me though was that shadow looks like it's impaling his forehead. Also, I keep waiting for him to look at me and that tension is never resolved. But nice subtle head movements.

philipp seis:

good timing. Moody.

Aaron Rivera:

Face feels a bit stiff at the end, and there aren't that many gestures to speak of, but given the setting and character setup, I think the latter issue fits. Great facial animation and story.