David Andrade:

Aweosme character I really like hte mouth shapes, the Cut bothers me because typically you want to rotate the camera some when cutting, else it jumps outat the eye

Jeff Kim:

This is the best one I've seen so far! I think all the ideas are there and reading clearly; it just needs a bit more polish, particularly on the lip sync at the end.

Simon Paquette:

Awesome facial animation on the first part when hes in the chair! lots of fun, I love it!
It feels like you cut to the wide shot much too soon, it really gives away the joke, it would be nice if it stayed on the close shot until right after "problem" when he starts stumbling.
the falling part where he flies over the table feels pretty forced, maybe if the table were much closer to him you'd have an easier time making the collapse more natural.
again great acting at the end! just work on your full body stuff, and its good to go!

Fernando Herrera:

Haha, great acting and mechanics

Emmanuel Vergne:

Great stuff on the face !!!
Good rhythm, nice poses... cool

Ryan Lowe:

Sweet work. I love how the fingers help sell the dialogue. Awesome work.

Daniel Huertas:

I like the acting choices a lot... but the body mechanics for the fall it threw me off a bit... you should have reversed the spine a couple of frames before the table turns.. instead of one frame that we cannot see.. and spacing wise also to feel more weight on the characters landing... but again.. nice acting! :D

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Ken Rice:

Some nice imaginative stuff here - great.

Cole Higgins:

I really like it. I dont neccesarily like the part when he getting up and you cant see him talking. other than that really nice stuff.

Avner Engel:

Nice work! My only crit would be to straighten the legs between 150-165 in order to have a better arc in the feet.

Virgil Tanasa:

very nice! cool facial expressions, maybe a bit overdone with the falling over the table, but great fun to watch! :)
the part i like the most is when he gets up from his chair :) great work there :)

Matt Tovar:

good stuff. love the falling

Javier Vazquez:

awesome fall!! very interesting and good acting!!

Senthilnathan D:

wow , very nice

Paul Naas:

Very nice. You started the fall before the fall sound, something that makes it stand out from many other entries. Nicely staged.

venkatesh:

good

Bader Badruddin:

really nice animation (especially when he gets up and stumbles)

Chris Sullivan:

This is awesome. I love the how his legs shake before he falls over. very nice

Mark Persson:

Perfect idea and character acting! The characters movement with the table are perfect, which makes it funny!

But the crash sound doesnt match the fall. The fall from the table comes to late!

Best!D

Sergey B.:

very nice :D

Erik Westlund:

Nice, athletic maneuver to match chaos in audio. I like the very brief amount of setup with wobbling knees. Makes gag a lot more surprising when it unfolds. Lots of nice little touches in mechanics and creative choices... weight shift in chair, quick glance sideways before he stands, coffee cut flying in opposite direction, etc. Hand gesture in the air at the end is not as effective as other acting choices. Thanks for avoiding the "medical exam" theme.

Joe Jacob:

Love the facial expressions! Really well done. And the fall looks believable. Nice work!

jeff:

god stuff

vince gorman:

good stuff, part on the table seems a bit off

Andrew Farrell:

Wow that was great! Love the arcs and the timing of everything

Marco Palmieri:

hey great animation, timing, posing and overall energy. would have been nice to see more of a reaction after his fall. Seems unnatural to just be on the floor happy.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

wow.. good facial animation. best best facial animation ive seen so far... that 1 camera cut though killed it.. i still think this is the best

Nate Lane:

haha sweet man! I really lvoe this one. I think that you could of toned down the fall a bit. It looks great exaggerated, but I think it's a tad little bit over exaggerated. Keep it up!

rushang:

one man sound like two

Carl Bérubé:

Ahahaha awesome. Good work!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Wow, very nice animation. Love the rolling of his eyes at frame ~60, the only critic I can give you is that the physics of the table doesn't feel 100%, it seem to give the character an unusual push forward.. Great work.

cheers
/ Chris

nadja kapeller:

i like the facial animation a lot

Lisa Allen:

nice job! awesome fall

Stephen Sues:

The expressions and animation are great. I will say, though, that you kind of push it with him doing what is on par with an Olympics gymnastics move on the table there.

Shannon:

Beautiful overall, but the flip off the table seems unmotivated. Some really nice work on the face, especially on "occasionally".

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Great interaction. Fall is a little bit exagered but it's correct. Good Follow through !

Janarthanan:

Liked acting at the begining..should have concentrated on secondary moments..end is not convincing..overal good output..Cheers..

Kyle Detwiler:

Great facials, creative idea!

Aparna Varma:

nice work!!

Niek Neervens:

haha nice!! nice lipsync aswell!!
this one is great!! :)

Christopher Pelloux:

Good animation. Although I think it looks a little weird that the guy actually goes over the table. Maybe if you make him get more speed or stretch him, it would look more realistic or just make the table fall on him when he touches it with his hand. I hop this helps...

David Leighton:

Nice! Great stumble and fall. I really like that. The only thing that stood out for me was the hand settle on the leg at f40ish... has a little pop in there. Maybe the elbow could lead the action a little more and the settle could be more in the elbow and shoulder than in the hand.

Kevin Adams:

Some great animation in your piece well done. I like that you start to see his legs tremble before they give up on him :)

JAEHYUN PARK:

Nice facial animation!
I found out when he lean his back on the table... should put more weight on him... when he takes off the ground at frame 142-147.
Pretty cool animation!!!

douglas anderson:

The mouth movement at the beginning looks great. The part where he starts falling is so smooth. Looks great.

Ben Crouse:

one of the best i've seen thus far! only crit is that you might be able to tweak the timing of the character hitting the table to better match with the audio.

Amdbcg:

audio for fall doesn't sync up
good animation though
-genarally fluid and follows most of the laws of physics