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Max Perelman:
Nice background. I like the posing for the turn on "and you!" but some of the other acting seems a bit arbitrary. There's a lot of movement on everything, so the big accent moves (turn and point, slip and fall) stand out less.
David Shum:
Might wanna check your compression settings! haha the colours are bleeding. Is this piece inspired by King Kong??
Ryan Lowe:
I like most of your poses. Neat!
Mike Courtney:
the gorilla needs some keep alive in the beginning; I initially thought it was a stuffed animal
Cole Higgins:
nice. It feels underanimated. Kind of like its still in the storyboard stages. Pick a small portion of it and really get it right. Thats a lot of work for 2D so may be just pick like the fall or a small part of the dialogue and really nail it. then youll get faster at doing larger senes
Christopher Salamat:
not too sure about him walking the way he was while talking. the other voice doesn't sound like laughing so i don't think it works to have the gorilla do so.
Harry G:
very nice .... the timing was good.
Mark Persson:
Nice idea, acting and character movement! Its funny, looks nice and original, i like that!
Beside from some graphic flaws in the anim, the fall looks like the main character tripping/sliding away instead of the legs falling to sleep.
Keep up with the good work!D
Marco Palmieri:
keep learning you're on the right track.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
the head suddenly jumped
nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:
Very nice, love the contrast when he says ("And you wants"), good work.
Troy:
Great effort
Christopher Pelloux:
It's to bad that some thing's wrong with the video (codec). Nice animation










Animator: Jarred de Beer
Description: he's trying to convince his gorilla friend that he's still fit for the jungle
Experience: still a student
Time taken: more than it should have