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Animator: Jarred de Beer

Description: he's trying to convince his gorilla friend that he's still fit for the jungle

Experience: still a student

Time taken: more than it should have

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Max Perelman:

Nice background. I like the posing for the turn on "and you!" but some of the other acting seems a bit arbitrary. There's a lot of movement on everything, so the big accent moves (turn and point, slip and fall) stand out less.

David Shum:

Might wanna check your compression settings! haha the colours are bleeding. Is this piece inspired by King Kong??

Ryan Lowe:

I like most of your poses. Neat!

Mike Courtney:

the gorilla needs some keep alive in the beginning; I initially thought it was a stuffed animal

Cole Higgins:

nice. It feels underanimated. Kind of like its still in the storyboard stages. Pick a small portion of it and really get it right. Thats a lot of work for 2D so may be just pick like the fall or a small part of the dialogue and really nail it. then youll get faster at doing larger senes

Christopher Salamat:

not too sure about him walking the way he was while talking. the other voice doesn't sound like laughing so i don't think it works to have the gorilla do so.

Harry G:

very nice .... the timing was good.

Mark Persson:

Nice idea, acting and character movement! Its funny, looks nice and original, i like that!

Beside from some graphic flaws in the anim, the fall looks like the main character tripping/sliding away instead of the legs falling to sleep.

Keep up with the good work!D

Marco Palmieri:

keep learning you're on the right track.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the head suddenly jumped

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Very nice, love the contrast when he says ("And you wants"), good work.

Troy:

Great effort

Christopher Pelloux:

It's to bad that some thing's wrong with the video (codec). Nice animation

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