Dead limb, 3 times!
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Mike Courtney:
good work
Cole Higgins:
there are some really nice natural looking poses in there. Goos job. although I really dont like the yell, its to literal. its just wierd how his body doesnt move and he does such a big yell.
Mark Persson:
Nice acting and movement!
Keep up with good work!
Erik Westlund:
Nice performance up until he starts shaking his head back and forth mechanically after falling. Secondary character has a nice combination of movements and gestures while he is listening.
Stefano:
the head shake after the fall (Frame 170) looks kinda strange, though the falling part is pretty good
eleazermunoz:
I would ignore the weird sound when he lands and it would make the animation look better
Marco Palmieri:
head nodding can be taken out, seems unnatural. animation is pretty good.
cayle ward:
really cool !
Kensaba:
I think the movement of head is trailling too much at "you want to call it a heath problem", but maybe it ´s caused by the heath problem... Second character is excellent, except for the "wowow" part, is too strange to both characteres. Good luck!
Brad Wright:
I liked the fall in this one.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
haha.. funny
Chris Peters:
I like this. Nice head arcs on screen L char. Watch your IK hands on both chars, with hands supporting on chair, and L hand on desk. Not sure why screen L grabs desk... to pull up? Not going to happen. Nice ambient acting on Screen R char. Make sure to reverse C curves on that fall, need lots of pushing.
Oscar Baechler:
That freakin' knee wobble between 125 and 155 is (in my mind) the best singular second in this competition, and the only thing I felt compelled to watch more than twice. You hit that fall right on the nose. G'job!
Shannon:
Nice ambient motion on the secondary character, and some great work with the faces.
Nicolas Fourcroy:
Very simple but efficient
Christopher Pelloux:
Not bad. Good lipsync.
When he is on the ground and says "oooow" the head movement doesn't look right. Oh, and try to animate other body parts: when he talks at the beginning you've animated the upper body but forgot the legs (very slight movements so they look alive even if they are asleep) ;)
Kevin Adams:
Some really animation well done :)
JAEHYUN PARK:
left hand is going through the chair at frame 142-146.
Ben Crouse:
Nice setup. There's some good subtle stuff going on at the beginning too!
Crit - the guy in the desk seems to stand up a little too quick - maybe delay that a bit so he's not fully standing until after the main character is fully on the ground?
Amdbcg:
love it! good rendering too - ambient occlusion :D
I'd add more emphasis on the yelling though - make his whole body jerk ...
but that's about it :)
great job!
-amdbcg










Animator: Stu Lloyd
Description: Talk show about health problems, the guest is in denial. I started late so I didn't have time to figure out the IK blending on the arms.....Whoops!
Experience: 3.5 years, 7 months industry
Time taken: 27 hours