Mike Courtney:

Work on your flow and timing.

Cole Higgins:

keep going. the poses arent fleshed out so it tends to look unfinished througout the piece.

Pete Shand:

Some bits are a bit snappy and off time, need to smooth out your keys and curves

Pablo Piccione:

Good...but, for me, the fall and sound is not quite sync. Take advantages of the fall to put more enphasis in acting.But very good job!

Mark Persson:

Good idea and acting! its funny;D Love both the charaters! Nice with the furnitures; its original!

Dont like the gaps betweens the ribs, the back, elbows and knees. If you could take away(smoothen out) that it would be much better!
the fall with the main character are little bit to fast!

I need a new beer!
Best!D

Erik Westlund:

Lots of good energy in the fall. I like the paralyzed arm as he drags himself up. Facial poses could probably be pushed a little more since the changes in expression are harder to see from this distance.

Marco Palmieri:

posing, weight, overlap, polish etc etc. Need to work on all of them. Potential is there. keep it up.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like it.. jsut alittle polishing with the fluidity would help alot

Troy:

Good story idea for the audio.

Shannon:

You have some good poses but you need to break them down a little more.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

When you move, all your body change, not on part at once.

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
I love that rig :)