Doctor's Orders

Final Rating: 3.11. Finished: 80 out of 92 entries.
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Animator: Kevin Adams

Description: A man unwilling to accept his doctor's diagnosis.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: roughly 15-20 hours

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Nate Lane:

Nice work mate :)

I think that the lip sync could use a little work. Really open the mouth on the annunciated words. Keep it up man!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

there is too much symmetry with your hands.. ofset them alittle.. also, i think theyre jsut moving all over the place. your left leg bearly moved.. and the right leg moved a couple frames then suddenly completely stopped.. you should give alittle small movement to it.
the feet are kinda stiff when he falls.. give more of a ball bend as he goes down.. and somewhere around occationally, the lip sync starts to mess up. you should clear that alittle.

Mike Mele:

It looked unfinished on most parts, but good start I guess! :P

Marco Palmieri:

need to work on transitions between poses and overlapping animation.

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs work, especially around frame 67

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

You have to fight the IK-arms they drive me crazy, otherwise decent animation. Try also to build up poses (more anticipation), need work but have potential.

cheers
/ Chris

Paul Naas:

This one's in here twice, I think. I've seen it twice during one session.

Andrew Farrell:

Very stiff for me, maybe vary up some poses and move the torso/chest area a little more.

Amdbcg:

lip syncing / sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio

David Thornfield:

"twinning" of the arms in "and you want to call it" i would have offset or really i would hae one hand move...

Phil Willis:

Needed more reaction after the fall instead of just lying motionless.