Doctor's Orders
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Nate Lane:
Nice work mate :)
I think that the lip sync could use a little work. Really open the mouth on the annunciated words. Keep it up man!
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
there is too much symmetry with your hands.. ofset them alittle.. also, i think theyre jsut moving all over the place. your left leg bearly moved.. and the right leg moved a couple frames then suddenly completely stopped.. you should give alittle small movement to it.
the feet are kinda stiff when he falls.. give more of a ball bend as he goes down.. and somewhere around occationally, the lip sync starts to mess up. you should clear that alittle.
Mike Mele:
It looked unfinished on most parts, but good start I guess! :P
Marco Palmieri:
need to work on transitions between poses and overlapping animation.
Mike Courtney:
lip-sync needs work, especially around frame 67
nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:
You have to fight the IK-arms they drive me crazy, otherwise decent animation. Try also to build up poses (more anticipation), need work but have potential.
cheers
/ Chris
Paul Naas:
This one's in here twice, I think. I've seen it twice during one session.
Andrew Farrell:
Very stiff for me, maybe vary up some poses and move the torso/chest area a little more.
Amdbcg:
lip syncing / sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
David Thornfield:
"twinning" of the arms in "and you want to call it" i would have offset or really i would hae one hand move...
Phil Willis:
Needed more reaction after the fall instead of just lying motionless.









Animator: Kevin Adams
Description: A man unwilling to accept his doctor's diagnosis.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: roughly 15-20 hours