Gregory Marlow:

none of the stuff before the audio starts really makes sense to me. Whats going on?

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs work

dark green shirt man needs a bigger reaction to the fall

Cole Higgins:

They arent really interacting with one another. Perhaps its because the never really look at one another. Pick some more solid poses as well. If I where to pick certain momnets in your piece would the poses be exciting and interesting or would they be bland. Keep going!!!

Avner Engel:

The impact of the fall feels a little too linear.

Harry G:

The start of the animation doen't make much sense when the character sitting on the table pushes the chair to the other guy. The way the he gets off the table is good. Could have done alot more.... cheers !!

Sean Hannon:

work on the lipsync, and the reaction by the second guy is too sleepy or robotic. Bring up the energy there.

Ian Johnston:

I don't understand the chair pushing at the beginning because the character doesn't take advantage of it. If you had the character maybe go to sit down in it and fall trying to get into the chair, the push is now justified.

Mark Persson:

Good acting, character movement!

I like the idea with the chair thing!!!, but the main character doesnt react enough, i think. You should polish on that i think.
Both the characters are moving to slow mostly.

Keep up with the good work!D

Marco Palmieri:

Need to cut some of the beginning out. Also need to work on the poses and make it snappier too.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

it needs to be more fluid.. consider looking around you and watch how poeple move..

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

It's a bit floaty needs more snappy motion.

/ Chris

Mike Mele:

Lip-sync looked a little off, animation needs more polishing.