Health Problem!?
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Gregory Marlow:
Very good posing. But it looks like you let maya do all your tweening. Get in there and massage those ease ins and outs. Make it do what you want it to
Dave Johnson:
I really like when his head comes back up onscreen for the yell after the first fall.
Nice work!
Fernando Herrera:
Cool, looks nice, but it just feels like the character is hitting every beat of the audio, and some of the acting choices are too lteral, and the hands feel stiff.
Keep it up!
Mike Courtney:
the rise from the fall needs to have better poses; the character would be bent forward a lot more coming from the ground
Cole Higgins:
cool model. I like it but it feels very tame. The face especially. really really push that face a lot more. The body animation is close but that could be pushed more as well. By pushed I mean more lively poses and more contrasts from one pose to the next.
Pete Shand:
Looks great but some of the acting looks a bit restrained.
Pablo Piccione:
Very complet characters needs very complete movements...it feels robotic..buy good modeling
Mark Persson:
Woow!!! Nice acting and character moving! Very realistic! Good body lanquage!
You have the basic of the lipsync and the face gesture, but its to stiff! It need some more work.
Best!D
Erik Westlund:
Gestures in the beginning seem very natural... sorry to say this but this has a kind of 'mocap' feel to it. Facial animation is extremely limited and has little appeal. Pointing gesture across body is not the best choice; closes off character from audience. Fall appears completely without justification, despite setup in audio.
Stefano:
The fall part is not very clear
The line "I can get up myself" should come before he gets up, this way feels not that effective
Marco Palmieri:
The motions seems to have been taken from footage and so it has a natural feel, but it needs to be simplified and the poses need to come through more. Also his expression when he falls is not believable. not bad overall.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
lol.. reminds me of high school... too much symmetry with the hands though
Nate Lane:
sweet man. I like the "real" nature to it! One thing that i think you could of done though is have him still on the ground as he says "no thank you...". Otherwise sweet job man!
Kevin Edzenga:
I feel as though when he goes "WOAH" the body should be falling, not going woah before the fall.
Kyle:
I like your gestures especially in the first half. one thing I would say is that he seems to float through poses in a very evenly timed fashion. this is not so much of an issue in the beginning, but I really notice it around frame 100 to the end.
Nicolas Fourcroy:
Realistic anim is hot to do ! The start is good but the fall is strange !
Aparna Varma:
i really like the "occasionally go to sleep bit"...nice!!
the animation is slow in parts but overall appeal is good...
Christopher Pelloux:
Did you model yourself? :D
As for the animation, some movements looks a little bit slow. Not bad though
Cristin McKee:
Not bad, you have really nice subtle stuff. But he feels a little too posey, trying to pose too many of the words. When he's "walking" away at the end, it feels like he's' just sliding. He needs some up and down and weight shift in there.
Dave Poler:
acting is not very interesting. A lot of movement and very floaty.
jamil:
too swimy










Animator: Gilad Kenan
Description: A guy how doesnt believe he has a health problem..
Experience: One year.
Time taken: 37 hours.