David Andrade:

Its his left side that hurts not the right...

Gregory Marlow:

Motion is good but is he a stand up comic or something. The scenario (or lack thereof) weakens the acting.

Emmanuel Vergne:

Nice rhythm, but way too symmetrical : beware of twinning
I don't understand why his left hand stick to the floor at the end

Ryan Lowe:

Good poses! Smooth motion!

Mike Courtney:

you're twinning the arms almost throughout the animation

Cole Higgins:

yeha that was cool, really nice way of ending up the piece with his body all limp. funny too how he pauses before he falls. in his acting it feels a little stiff. I think its in his hips. I dont really feel the wieght in his hips.

Sebastian Crossley-Zels:

love the concept. The animation doesn't quite go with the sound clip but i thought you animation was great... talent in you i see, lol. Keep it up

Sean Hannon:

Nothing happens at the "whoop" which makes the fall odd.

Pablo Piccione:

nice fall dude! very flowing! I like your work

Mark Persson:

The acting and the character are perfect! It funny when he just standing there. I love this small movement!D

But the fall feels strange coming and the left sleeping arm seems to heavy. Its not lead!
Have you never being woken up in the middle of the night notes that your arm has fallen in sleep??? its not heavy like that!

Best!D

Jr Prez:

the first half does look good for me, everything seems to be moving too symetrical but the end is quite good

Todd Kough:

I think I would have put the quotes just before the word health problem. Also I am not getting the emotion from the facial expression to show that he is angry.

eleazermunoz:

his hand looks more stuck to the floor then limp, it also has so twist issues

Marco Palmieri:

some nice poses and pretty good timing. but not really pushing the concept. keep it up.

cayle ward:

hahaha interesting ! im not sure what the acting is though... the character is a stage comedian? If so the self motivated fall works really nice, but im not sure i understand the payoff to the "gag"

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

this is good..keep working though..

Nate Lane:

sweet man! I think that you should of has his mouth in the shape of a frown more, because the audio shows that he's mad, and It seems that you have him smiling part of the time. other than that I think this is awesome! keep it up!

Chris Peters:

Funny. Nice "performance to audience" feel, but it doesn't really fit the dialogue.

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Good clean animation, look at the right arm at frame 132 looks like an IK-Lock of the hand, files like a mime, otherwise great animation.

cheers
/ Chris

Troy:

Nicely done!

YatiYati:

hmm..Animation is good...need more

Nicolas Fourcroy:

The fall is a little bit strange

Janarthanan:

good poses and animation..but regular way of acting..whil saying"occasionaly.."wats happening wi fingers???

Jarrod Anderson:

Nice acting within the initial pose, and a nice, realistic struggle with his dead weight at the end. I would probably look at leading into "health problem" a little earlier though. Nice work!

Niek Neervens:

hehe i really like the timing when one arm goes to sleep and then the rest of his body follows :)

Cristin McKee:

Really nice! The arms feel a bit weird in the hold at 51, like they stop oddly.

And the body stopping so upright at 104 immediately jumps out as a bit awkward cause his weight is so centered for so long. And when his right leg comes over at 112, there isn't much weight shift.

I love "your help" at the end. Beautiful head gesture!

Adam Conarroe:

before frame 124 i think you have weak acting choices. Frame 80 looks like he's bowing. After 124, though i think it's really good. I love the squash & stretch.

Ben Crouse:

i like this one

Victoria Alexander:

It bothers me that, after he falls, his left hand stays completely rooted in one spot, even when he struggles against it. That isn't an arm that's fallen asleep, that's a metal arm on a magnet floor.

RaJeSh dCrEaToR:

ya good ani............!
& at 107-111 frame while shifting his right leg the weight should b shifted means hip movement..............! nice xpression.
good luck dude.

Amdbcg:

little stiff in some places
-fluid but only in parts

jamil:

needs a bit more work but overall I love it