Health problem
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Mike Courtney:
the blue's pose at 259 seems a bit off / too extreme of a back off
adolfo:
it is nice but in some poses your animation is a bit too even.
Michael Van Alstine:
From frame 285 and up is pretty
good.
vince gorman:
needs clarity, clear simple poses
Marco Palmieri:
Bit floaty at times. Needs more snappyness especially in the facial expressions. Not a bad job overall.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
when he pushes the door open, it didnt look right.. also the hand animation needs some work
Aparna Varma:
nice work!
Christopher Pelloux:
It looks weird when he comes back to get up. He looks like he's gonna fall all the stairs and he's already there.
It also looks like he's floating when he's on his knees. Even if we don't see the stairs you should model so you can position him better. I hope this helps :)
Cristin McKee:
Nice start but you need to pay more attention to the fingers. They sort of lock in an almost default pose for a lot of it. Have them move separately of each other.
Daniel H:
Pretty good animation. When the arm drops, it's a tad stiff. You might try giving it a little more overshoot.
On he reappearing at the stares, have him shoot upward a bit more, and then come down to rest, like he almost jumped all the way back up. Follow through and finish.










Animator: alan fujito
Description: my legs and my RIGHT arm 'occasionally' go to sleep too...
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: about 30 hours