Mike Courtney:

animation's good, consider backing up the camera to include the feet and the top of the head

Michael Van Alstine:

One of the better fall gags.

Andrion Becker:

his supporting arm should stay planted when he sits up

Senthilnathan D:

i think .. Improve your acting skill….

Mark Persson:

Really good idea, acting and movement. Funny that he just standing there and holding a stone.

When he falls it doesnt feel like he is falling because of the issue, more of that he is losing his balance!?

Keep up with the good work!D

Erik Westlund:

very minimal environment and color allows audience to focus on the performance. Main action appears to happen along a straight line in the middle of the screen... missed opportunity for arcs in movement.

Marco Palmieri:

what is the box for? need a clearer idea to sell this gag.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

too stiff on the torso.. give it more overlap and exagerate it alittle.. after all thats alfred you're animating

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Good animation, would look at the feet looks like there sliding. Also the balance is a bit of from time to time.

cheers
/ Chris

Shannon:

I'm a bit confused by your acting choices. I'm not sure what the box is supposed to be, or what he is doing with it.

Ben Crouse:

subtle- i like it