Health Problem @Alexandro Castro
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Simon Paquette:
Really nice subtle acting at the beginning, I'm definitely digging the nervous guy on the stool :)
once he starts falling over I feel like the body mechanics really fall apart, and the cutting is a little unnatural.
good stuff though, keep it up!
Ryan Lowe:
This turned out great! Great facial animation in there!
Mike Courtney:
work on lip-sync, build some anticipation for the fall, have a reason for the patient to stand
adolfo:
the only think a can point out is the last camera change
Cole Higgins:
yeah its ggod. At some points it feels very jerky. like at the end 333 his body moves very unaturally and right before that on frame 230 ish his arm is very jerky. Its tends to look very comuterie and less lifelike.
Avner Engel:
I like the accents and phrases, nicely done. The lip sync feels a little bit off though.
Andrion Becker:
you may want to find a different way of staging this, in the first shot I find myself looking more at the doctor character in the foreground than the one talking
Pete Shand:
Good work, at the end his brow is in an angry expression the whole time, it'd be nice if it was a little more dynamic
Paulo Cesar Biajante:
great job man! great poses and timming!
Mark Persson:
Good acting, lipsync and character movement. Good camera angels.
maybe you could get the main character up just a small snapp earlier, the fall feels wrong somehow.
Keep up with the good work!D
Erik Westlund:
Nice quick walk across the room performed by the attendant. Setup for fall is very simple and works. Asymmetry could be pushed in facial poses.
eleazermunoz:
he put weight on this dead arm when he is sitting and also goes back in to place
Marco Palmieri:
Need to work on lip sync and also the poses need to be clear and snappier.
Nate Lane:
awesome man! I watched your progress with this one and it turned out great. One thing that I said before tho is that you should anticipate him getting up. Keep up the excellent work my friend!
Carl Bérubé:
I love it. The lipsync might be off a bit, but the animation is overall top notch.
There are some weird acting decisions, but, again, overall, it's so polished, I don't care!
Lisa Allen:
really nice animation! umm.. haha the nose twitching at the end is a little weird though!
Troy:
Nice animation!
pratik virash:
man u did good work i like expressions. i dont like is when he is running u gave him little curve to path.dat is not needed
Janarthanan:
could have made the falling guy more better..use squash-stretch in correct proportion....
Stu Lloyd:
Nice and smooth, but he looks a little too rubbery and his expression is too angry for the last line of dialogue
David Leighton:
Lots of nice principals at work here. The left arm hits the leg at f69 a bit hard for the amount of recoil. i think a little more bounce in the hand and shoulder. The left arm might have a bit too much weight in the following 2 sec, and it feels a bit too stiff.
The "whoop" appears to be happening when he's standing instead of falling, ya might just have him attempt the stand sooner.
Dave Poler:
Both characters have acting choices that are a bit busy at the same and it is hard to decide which one too look at. It needs more polish
Ben Crouse:
not completely sold on is the physicality of the fall, but some good facial animation going on throughout!
Daniel H:
Good acting, but the facial expressions are harsh in transition. Try smoothing them out a little.
Amdbcg:
his fall sound doesn't sync up with the animation









Animator: Alexandro Castro
Description: I tried to bring for the personage my fear of injections. I hope you enjoiy.
Experience: 4 Years
Time taken: approximately five days (at free time)