Major Problems
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Sergey B.:
:D
Nate Lane:
haha I love the guy on the ground pushing the other guys face. that's great! and the expression as he does it! Keep it up man!
Shannon:
Nice overall. The fall seems a little soft for the audio, and the secondary character's big stretch antic might need to be toned down to match the rest of the animation.
Ken Rice:
nice urgency in the standing character after the fall
Mike Mele:
Awesome job! I think the green-eyed character's jump backwards was too slow and floaty though.
Marco Palmieri:
this is not bad. some nice motion and weight. lip sync needs polishing. I like the guy helping him up. the expressions are not totally matching the emotion of the character when he's fallen. keep it up :)
Brad Jacobson:
Love that the one character actually tries to help the other up. Haven't seen that in a lot of clips. Well done!
Michael Van Alstine:
Good interaction of the two characters from frame 224.
Jayesh J.Yatgiri:
Hey Nice one ! I would have made that stick break and then make dat old guy fall down.
Lip sync needs a little work.
I like the way the old guy pushes the other guys face away !
Good work
All the best
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
the fall looks too slow.. you should finish animating your feet..
Mike Courtney:
the fall needs to happen a bit faster
Paul Yan:
the fall felt a little soft but otherwise nice work
Carl Bérubé:
A bit floaty, but I guess it goes with the situation and the character!
Good work! Keep it up!
gerardo:
Really good.. maybe it can be better, but now is very good
Ben Crouse:
yes, I like that the secondary character is very much a part of the scene instead of just standing there. kudos!
Virgil Tanasa:
pretty nice. unfortunately you cut on the most interresting change in expression, which should have happened on "and you want to call it..." part. other than that, looks okay, except maybe the moment his limbs fall asleep, he has a very big reaction which looks odd.
Daniel H:
The fall and lip-sync are a little off to me, polish those up.
The interaction with the guy trying to help him up is awesome! Good work!
Simon:
A few little probs with the lip sync but overall I thought this was really fun to watch!
Mark Persson:
Good acting, lipsync and character movement.
Best!D
David Shum:
I like how the green ey
Erik Westlund:
Nice poses overall. I like the twisted up pose that anticipates his fall. Finger and hand poses are a little awkward, such has his right hand around frames 60-66. Mouth positions pop a little.









Animator: Jamie Giger
Description: Oops he broke it.
Experience: Not enough but four years.
Time taken: Too much time... if you ask my girlfriend.