Gregory Marlow:

Too many poses

Marco Palmieri:

Your poses need to be blended more from one to the other. Don't stop your character completely. It takes the life out of it. You need to work on weight and poses more.

Mike Mele:

The animation was very stiff, try to ease in and out with your actions and add small subtle movements when the character is still. It really makes a difference!

Cole Higgins:

nice, I like the ending. very funny. Try to flesh out your animation and give it some more movement. Right now its still in the step stages.

eleazermunoz:

look a bit off timed

Niek Neervens:

nice work! but maybe you could've offset the arms and the rest of his body a bit and ad some followtrough on his head and body when he falls

Cristin McKee:

Nice stary, but his lip synch is far too big and it's instantly distracting.

Mike Courtney:

the secondary character needs work, the fall on the main character needs work

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

spacing.. its too even

Aparna Varma:

nice work..but the fall is a lil awkward...

Mark Persson:

Good acting and idea. You have manage to creat all basic movement, which i think it needs to be more smoothen out. both the movment and lipsync.

Best!D

andyM:

could do with a few less poses

Simon Paquette:

Great idea and set up, it seems pretty unfinished though. I don't want to jump the gun and say the acting choices are poor... but it all comes off as VERY stiff. Flesh out the poses you've got and really think about the timing and spacing of each movement.
this scene has a lot of potential, but It's just not there yet.

Amdbcg:

lip syncing needs work. also, more smooth animation curves

Harry G:

The poses were good.... and it looked more like a pose to pose animation.

jamil:

too many poses

adolfo:

Too meny even poses. I think there should be less poses and more readable ones. Some times the poses are a bit of in time.