sandeepan chanda:

Hey, nice effort. But the problem here is, "we cannot feel the weight", which is important. Also the animation is like the character is striking poses, rather than really expressing his dilema!!

Shannon:

May want to rethink your staging or camera set-up for starters. Some more inbetweens would help smooth out the actions.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the fall looks staged and unnatural.. and it looks too posey.. and the spacing is too even.. break it down alittle.. the animation would be alot better

Marco Palmieri:

staging is too much to the left.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Your character seem to be a robot ! Check your F-Curves to smooth mouvments !

Omri Navot:

Your weak choice of camera angle detracts from the animation.

Mike Courtney:

think about the weight of the character, the pose on frame 235 isn't possible without falling

Pablo Piccione:

too robotic! Keep enchance! Not to much face expression

jeff:

hey bro u placed just poses .............. where is timing , spacing & .........................ani ????

Wes Storhoff:

Some more motion in the torso and arm would be good, all motion seems to stop when you hit each of your poses

Cole Higgins:

more wieght in your character. Right now its almost as though the only think animated is the arm and the kneck to move the head. Get the whole body involved.

Roy Salamida:

no grid plz

Amdbcg:

physics are a little off - check your curves

vince gorman:

bad camera angle

adolfo:

I think you have to make your poses stay longer in time before moving to the next pose. More changes in rithim. Now is to even. Also the main poses neds to be much stronger.