No More Monkeys

Final Rating: 4.53. Finished: 34 out of 92 entries.
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Animator: Angelo Collazo

Description: Two monkeys in a tree engage in a one sided conversation.

(work in progress)

Experience: 12 months on and off

Time taken: at least 40 hours

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Sergey B.:

funny :))

Kevin Adams:

hehe works great :) nice1

Ian Johnston:

Nice creative solution. I would have liked to have seen him hitting the branch harder with some secondary bounce as he rounds it to come off. The audio track has quite a bit of commotion happening and you can throw this monkey into the trees on the way down before he hits the ground too. Just audio food for thought.

Sako Mahamadou:

Nice idea

Chris Peters:

I like screen L char meditation. Not enough squash & stretch on the fall/drop land. Screen L tail gets totally stiff. Screen R getting up is stiff, walk off is poppy. Really push that squeeze on the banana, especially if it's just a thumb and index. Nice job with some foot/hand adjustment on the branch.

Emilio Aguirre:

Nice Idea

Ryan Lowe:

Hahaha.
Wow. I guess great minds think alike or something? Weird! Well great take on it! The motion is fantastic, I struggled with that tail though. How about you?

Kyle Detwiler:

The brown monkey's arm movements seem repetitive. If he wasn't holding the banana, there may have been more room for interesting gestures. I love that he hits a branch as he's falling though! Creative way to take this audio!

Dane Winn:

left monkeys tail bit too rigid

Pete Shand:

Nice one! just the fall at the end is a little awkward

Niek Neervens:

hehe cool idea :D

Sean Hannon:

great concept.

Marco Palmieri:

i like the idea. but the emotions of the character dont come through enough. also needs polishing still.

Mike Courtney:

fall needs a small amount of work, the walk away of the brown seems to be too heavy for a creature that size

Traci Plagmann:

This looks pretty good. Nice keep alive stuff on the left character. It would be fun to see the right character bounce a little after hitting the bar.

Kensaba:

I like it, but need to work the tails.

Kevin Edzenga:

Meditating monkey is awsome.

Emmanuel Vergne:

the right monkey' left foot doesn't hold the branch properly : it should be like his left hand.
He could fall faster to make it more painfull

Amdbcg:

meh... too fast on the animation - would like to see more emphasis on action

Riaan:

Great idea
This was a tough one
Good job
if you spend more time on it, it would look great. keep animating

Mark Persson:

Nice idea! good acting and movement!

Maybe if you could zoom in a bit, i think it could be better.
The main characters fall into the ground need some polish.

Keep up with the good work!D