No More Monkeys
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Sergey B.:
funny :))
Kevin Adams:
hehe works great :) nice1
Ian Johnston:
Nice creative solution. I would have liked to have seen him hitting the branch harder with some secondary bounce as he rounds it to come off. The audio track has quite a bit of commotion happening and you can throw this monkey into the trees on the way down before he hits the ground too. Just audio food for thought.
Sako Mahamadou:
Nice idea
Chris Peters:
I like screen L char meditation. Not enough squash & stretch on the fall/drop land. Screen L tail gets totally stiff. Screen R getting up is stiff, walk off is poppy. Really push that squeeze on the banana, especially if it's just a thumb and index. Nice job with some foot/hand adjustment on the branch.
Emilio Aguirre:
Nice Idea
Ryan Lowe:
Hahaha.
Wow. I guess great minds think alike or something? Weird! Well great take on it! The motion is fantastic, I struggled with that tail though. How about you?
Kyle Detwiler:
The brown monkey's arm movements seem repetitive. If he wasn't holding the banana, there may have been more room for interesting gestures. I love that he hits a branch as he's falling though! Creative way to take this audio!
Dane Winn:
left monkeys tail bit too rigid
Pete Shand:
Nice one! just the fall at the end is a little awkward
Niek Neervens:
hehe cool idea :D
Sean Hannon:
great concept.
Marco Palmieri:
i like the idea. but the emotions of the character dont come through enough. also needs polishing still.
Mike Courtney:
fall needs a small amount of work, the walk away of the brown seems to be too heavy for a creature that size
Traci Plagmann:
This looks pretty good. Nice keep alive stuff on the left character. It would be fun to see the right character bounce a little after hitting the bar.
Kensaba:
I like it, but need to work the tails.
Kevin Edzenga:
Meditating monkey is awsome.
Emmanuel Vergne:
the right monkey' left foot doesn't hold the branch properly : it should be like his left hand.
He could fall faster to make it more painfull
Amdbcg:
meh... too fast on the animation - would like to see more emphasis on action
Riaan:
Great idea
This was a tough one
Good job
if you spend more time on it, it would look great. keep animating
Mark Persson:
Nice idea! good acting and movement!
Maybe if you could zoom in a bit, i think it could be better.
The main characters fall into the ground need some polish.
Keep up with the good work!D









Animator: Angelo Collazo
Description: Two monkeys in a tree engage in a one sided conversation.
(work in progress)
Experience: 12 months on and off
Time taken: at least 40 hours