Walking Hazard
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David Shum:
End framing is a little weak. And the whole idea of why they're in a gym is a little lost for me. good effort :D
Mike Courtney:
the left hand pops from the wall to the floor when the blue shirt man falls
Ken Rice:
Nice animation - would have been nice to see the hands of the guy with the weights shake a bit before the other guy walks away.
Javier Vazquez:
this one is very funny, i like a lot the guy who is trying to save himself with the wall, a very interesting idea :D
Paul Naas:
Nice scenario, and great use of the sound fx to do something other than showing the speaking character fall down.
Sean Hannon:
A little confusing as the action of the weightlifter takes focus and it is not clear what happens to him when the guy falls.
Pablo Piccione:
Good acting. nice work
Mark Persson:
Good acting, lipsync and movement!
Need to polish with the idea some more.
Keep up with the good work!D
Miroslav Maletic:
Awsome work!!
I like the facial expressions.
But when he falls...It looks like he's doing it intentionaly.Maybe you should make him falling at right side until frame 190.
Once more,great job!!
jeff:
fine
Todd Kough:
The character lifting the weights wrist is over extended while lifting
eleazermunoz:
should have show more of a reaction on the man lifting the weight, Maybe pulled back
Marco Palmieri:
concept is good. would have been nice to see him actually spotting him and then falling!
Nate Lane:
sweet man I love the idea! does the guy die!? haha keep it up!
Janarthanan:
good idea...
Niek Neervens:
i really like the idea!
Nacho:
Funny idea!!
thomas reardon:
Grabbing at the wall looks good but we need to see his face more. All the camera angle need to be modified to improve visual composition.
Roy Salamida:
what a hootenany. do you wear pants to da gym bro? i it dig tho.
Amdbcg:
like it ! good secondary animation too :)
needs a wee bit smoother curves










Animator: Ian Johnston
Description: Two working out buddies discuss one's handicap.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 23 - 25 hours