David Shum:

End framing is a little weak. And the whole idea of why they're in a gym is a little lost for me. good effort :D

Mike Courtney:

the left hand pops from the wall to the floor when the blue shirt man falls

Ken Rice:

Nice animation - would have been nice to see the hands of the guy with the weights shake a bit before the other guy walks away.

Javier Vazquez:

this one is very funny, i like a lot the guy who is trying to save himself with the wall, a very interesting idea :D

Paul Naas:

Nice scenario, and great use of the sound fx to do something other than showing the speaking character fall down.

Sean Hannon:

A little confusing as the action of the weightlifter takes focus and it is not clear what happens to him when the guy falls.

Pablo Piccione:

Good acting. nice work

Mark Persson:

Good acting, lipsync and movement!

Need to polish with the idea some more.

Keep up with the good work!D

Miroslav Maletic:

Awsome work!!
I like the facial expressions.
But when he falls...It looks like he's doing it intentionaly.Maybe you should make him falling at right side until frame 190.
Once more,great job!!

jeff:

fine

Todd Kough:

The character lifting the weights wrist is over extended while lifting

eleazermunoz:

should have show more of a reaction on the man lifting the weight, Maybe pulled back

Marco Palmieri:

concept is good. would have been nice to see him actually spotting him and then falling!

Nate Lane:

sweet man I love the idea! does the guy die!? haha keep it up!

Janarthanan:

good idea...

Niek Neervens:

i really like the idea!

Nacho:

Funny idea!!

thomas reardon:

Grabbing at the wall looks good but we need to see his face more. All the camera angle need to be modified to improve visual composition.

Roy Salamida:

what a hootenany. do you wear pants to da gym bro? i it dig tho.

Amdbcg:

like it ! good secondary animation too :)
needs a wee bit smoother curves