Stu Lloyd:

Nice animation! I would have slowed the falling though, it looks more like the character trips, than their limbs going to sleep.

Marco Palmieri:

ideas is cute but not all that clear. Animation need allot of polishing. never have your character totally stop. work on overlapping and secondary motion and you'll be surprised at how much more life you give your characters.

Avner Engel:

I didn't buy the fall, it lacked an anticipation and there was no impact of the weight hitting the floor.

Mike Courtney:

the fall happens a bit too quickly, the gray's response to the fall is a bit late

Omri Navot:

Your camera choice for the last shot is not very appealing; we are looking at the back of the characters' heads.

Cole Higgins:

seems very underanimated. Right now its kind of like in the stry board stage. Really pimp up the movement and get those guys moving fluidly and nicely.

Janarthanan:

could have made tht sliping or fallin dwn part more better..

Brad Wright:

Sorry I'm using yours to vent about many others as well.....The sound of the character falling goes on for a good second after the character is on the ground and completly still. How can he be thumping on the ground if he stops moving after the initial thud?

Amdbcg:

flat - needs to be smooth, dude

Virgil Tanasa:

it looks unfinished, the fall is very mechanic. you may want to check some of the silhouettes too and watch out for the twinning throughout your animation.