Ryan Lowe:

I like your overlapping action all over the place. Cool stuff.

Mike Courtney:

it looks like he is throwing himself backwards, not falling backwards

Chris Niewinski:

I would have him losing his balance more pronounced. It kind of looks like an invisible force or the wind knocked him over.

Cole Higgins:

get that animation more fluid. Right now its pretty jerky. Nice arcs and settles and anticapation.

Sebastian Crossley-Zels:

Timing...

Mark Persson:

Good acting and movement!

You have the most of basic acting but it needs more work!

Keep up with good work!

Jr Prez:

I think the problem here, is the fall. you did a good arc from 190-200 but then you stopped the movement of the pelvis for 5 frames, which adds this unnatural feeling. also try to put some anticipation frames

vince gorman:

way over the top

Marco Palmieri:

some nice motions in there but overall didn't have appeal because there was no concept behind it.

Brad Wright:

Why is he standing on a desk?

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

camera shot kills it.. you should fix that

Nate Lane:

I like how you animated the camera as another character. One thing that you could fix up is the lip sync. It seems that he's just opening and closing his mouth. I'm assuming you just ran out of time :) . Keep it up :D

Chris Peters:

Why is this guy standing on a table? What are the inner forces? Why is the character saying what he/she is saying, and in the way it's being said?

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

I don't understand the concept, the animation is solid. Also when the character loses his ability to use his legs + arm he should not jump upwards, think of a boxer being knocked out :)

cheers
/ Chris

Shannon:

He appears to throw himself backwards, rather that just collapse or fall. Might need to slow down some of it.

Stu Lloyd:

a little jerky, and the lip sync needs a lot more detail, I like the running camera though!

David Leighton:

There some good ideas here. The 'sleepy' arm timing and arc is a bit off from the body movement in the beginning of the antic. On f47 the arm hits a wall as it comes back towards the bod, before the big movement. Theres a bit of a pop on f88 which feels like its going to anticipate a fast movement but the big swing with the arm is about 15 frames long from the extremes and it feels a bit too slow.

Kevin Adams:

The camera move does not really work I think it would work better if it was simply locked in the initial position for the entire shot. Also him standing on the table seems a bit odd try and think of a way you can make the audience empathise with the character. Perhaps he got so angry he climbed on to the table to express his feelings fully? Some nice snappy animation at the start.

Amdbcg:

choppy in places