Patricia Ross:

Nice animation! I would rethink the screen left arm hand on hip pose, I think you could get a stronger silhouette.

Emmanuel Vergne:

Good
Beware of twinning : avoid too symmetrical poses like at frame 106

Ryan Lowe:

This one made me chuckle. Great force and timing on the hit. Hahaha.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

adolfo:

very nice. I think the only gesture that I will take out is when he says "goes to sleep"

Cole Higgins:

its really nice. Great movement and solid animation. Its funny some of the acting choices you chose are like identical to my own. I think for the next couple animations we should both try and push the poses in terms of creativity and all that stuff. Great animation though.

Andrew Linke:

like the head bonk

andyM:

animations decent, not sure why the guy in the chair dies?

Mathias AUBRY:

I have to say that I've been surprise by your animation! It really made me laugh when he hit his head on the table! 7stars for me!

Javier Vazquez:

uuff hahaha nice blow, that hurts too :D

Ian Johnston:

I really like his anticipation before he drops and hits his head on the table. Good timing and movement too. Not too sure the involvement of the alien in the foreground though.

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting and movement for the main character.

Dont understand what the second character are doing in the end.

Keep up with the good work!D

Jessie Baldwin:

Kinda lost on what the other guy is doing in the chair. Other wise, really good.

Marco Palmieri:

Good motion and weight. Nice poses and snappy action, but the overall idea is not clear. Where is he? Who's the other guy?

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the face is tilted too much.. camera cant see the facial expressions.. because of this, emotion isnt being sent to the audience as well

Nate Lane:

awesome man! I really like the pose on "sleep". Although it is twinned I think it's an awesome place to break that "rule". Keep it up :D

Kevin Edzenga:

The table is heavy, the guy hit every mark in the audio. No body part really stays still for more than a few frames and even then it's ussually because it's on something or to make the point clear. Is that other guy sleeping though? hah, Very Nice.

Stephen Sues:

Really like the anticipation with the shaking arm right before he falls, as well as his head hitting the table.

Janarthanan:

good work..hand have same timing..axns r symetrical..ie..bot the hand has same timing and axn..could have added contrast in spine bending its always in left..even head movmnts r all the same...no interesting twists..

Niek Neervens:

ouch :D that has to hurt, haha!

Christopher Pelloux:

Well animated but what's with the other guy?

Cristin McKee:

Good start but I don't understand what's going on with the guy in the chair. I'd take out the bit where he falls and gasps like a fish.

On the main guy I'd pay more attention to his arms hitting poses at the same time and overlap that a bit.

douglas anderson:

The experssions are great. And I really like the timing when he hits his head. The fall is really funny.

Ben Crouse:

Made me laugh! my only crit is with the guy in the chair - seems like he's asleep? that threw me a little. since the main character is talking directly to him it seems like he's falling asleep exactly when he should be startled.

David Thornfield:

framing is off need to have the camera lower so we can see that the guy in chair is sleeping didn't see that and can still barely read that second time through...bring camera down is all...good weight and timing though animation wise

Amdbcg:

great :) still, I think color is probably important . Also, maybe more audio linkage (frame 210 ish) with the falling
good animation though - I like it when his hand shoots out :)