Fernando Herrera:

This is a good one!
Overall I just think you could sell more his expressions on the brows so he feels more awkward. And some parts of the lipsync are not reading perfectly.

Good job!

Mike Courtney:

check the lip-sync especially around "problem," about frame 163

Ken Rice:

Good effort but you're very square on to your character.

Cole Higgins:

its really close to being good!!!
When he says "and you wanna call it a health problem" his expression doesnt really change. His enmotions a a little monotone through out the piece. Use the emotional change to your advantage and really spice up the scene. "And you" i where he turns it on the audience and is a great chance to change his emotions.

Pete Shand:

Looks nice! lips are a bit off around the mid mark tho.

Javier Vazquez:

nice acting and movement, very soft. great

Senthilnathan D:

nice......

Paul Naas:

Believable weight. Nice work.

Ian Johnston:

Good lip syncing to the script. Might add more punch to the fall by hitting a definite anticipation pose of the surprise before he goes down. Then drop him like a sack of flower.

Joe Jacob:

Some of the mouth movements don't seem fully realized. But otherwise, a great job!

vince gorman:

good eyes/eyebrow stuff, the fall seems weightless

Marco Palmieri:

good animation here. the idea is not very original but the motion and expressions good. keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the gestures repeat too much.. too much symmetry.. good animation though

BigZ:

This is really good. But i think you need to think about those twinned poses as well as linear timing.

Chris Peters:

Some nice acting choices at the beginning. the fall feels really soft. I'm pretty sure he tore all his rotator cuff muscles trying to pull himself up at the end... "When in doubt, act it out!"

Omri Navot:

Push the acting, especially in the eye and brow area

Shannon:

The beginning dialogue is solid, but the fall backwards seems unmotivated, and he hits the ground a bit soft.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Why your chara fall ?

Janarthanan:

couldnt understand y he is falling...

Srdan:

I thinkt that the first half was great. He does small gestures and does not overact. Its the fall that I find a bit strange. It doesnt feel as natural as the part when he is sitting down and talking. also it feels more like he is being pushed by something than his feet falling asleap. Nice work thought!

Cristin McKee:

Nice! Feels a bit twinned though, the arms move rather together, try overlapping that a bit. And he feels a bit weightless when pulling self up at the end.

Kevin Adams:

Some really nice animation here.. I like the way you have animated the hands and some expressions. The character falling backwards is a bit 2 dramatic in my opinion and I don't think he should move forward at frame 224-226.. have him pull himself forward after that. But well done, I really enjoyed it :)

JAEHYUN PARK:

Nice Lip Sync!!!

David Thornfield:

falling backwards doesn't make sense...he doesn't have any momentum going that way and isn't leaning that way should have fallen forward...the arms twin on a couple gestures...

Amdbcg:

great lip syncing :) (especially after 212)
it's not perfect, but rendering was good - good lighting, good model, etc .
:D - ambient occlusion if I'm not mistaken

jamil:

a lot of twinning going on here