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Final Rating: 4.4. Finished: 37 out of 92 entries.
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Animator: Paulo Cesar Biajante

Description: sometimes, it is not difficult to understand the preferences of friends ...

Experience: 3 competitions

Time taken: 2 weeks, in time off

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Jr Prez:

I love it :D

Ian Johnston:

I really enjoy the color scheme and the shapes you have going on in the animation. The fall feels slow to me for the amount of damage done. If that's sped up, then you have time to chain react the other objects onto him, bouncing around, etc. . . livening up the moment a little more.

Mike Mele:

The blue character's body looked a bit stiff in the beginning of the animation, loosen up your characters a little more!

Marco Palmieri:

animation is ok. But I can't help but feel it's lacking in something. maybe the staging isn't clear enough and we don't feel his emotions changing too.

cayle ward:

you set up a nice idea here, where tan guy is more worried about the vase than he is about blue guy. keep him on the vase and it would add a bunch more comedy... when the guy falls, it seems he could use some more physics, throw an intelligent breakdown or two in there and see what you get!

Senthilnathan D:

wow.. nice work..

YatiYati:

I think you have to add more body movements....

Sean Hannon:

I like the domino effect of falling stuff. I'd space it out and perhaps have the cactus teeter then fall, and have him react to the spines with a broad look.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

kinda floaty// but cool

Mike Courtney:

in the beginning the blue man's left arm is a bit jerky

Javier Vazquez:

nice work! pretty acting

Sean Vandeputte:

I love how he's more concerned with the vase than the guy falling...

Carl Bérubé:

Good work!

Miroslav Maletic:

Looks good.But I think you need to work a little bit more on timing.I like the facial expressions on the begining.Maybe you should add more secondary action on both characters.But generaly looks pretty good!

Cole Higgins:

its cool but there not really much acting going on. Also At the angle of the camerea his upper teeth kind of block the viewer from seeing the bottom teeth move. It alsmost looks like he not talking. Good effort but really pish those poses and acting.

Ben Crouse:

some good ideas in there!

Not Available:

You might want stronger poses. Great work!

Roy Salamida:

hmmm... need work on sense of gravity

Amdbcg:

lip syncing is awesome :P
the fall though, audio needs some work
good secondary animation .

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting and character movement!

But... It looks like the main character are whispering when speaking. Need to open it up some.
The main characters weight and the fall doesnt work, move the weight and the shaking thing to the other leg instead.
The other character has a nice and a funny jump, but it needs to be polished some, i think!

Keep up with the good work!D

Christopher Pelloux:

good work