surgeon problems...

Final Rating: 5.71. Finished: 8 out of 92 entries.
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Animator: Stefano

Description: A surgeon has some health problems

Experience: few years

Time taken: in my spare time

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Sergey B.:

nice idea

Shannon:

A lot of nice moments in here. The speaker's walk towards the operating table feels off balance.

Ken Rice:

Nice animation - the knife (I think it's a knife) is picked up a bit too quickly I feel.

Lori Sawhney:

that's great!

Christopher Pelloux:

Good animation

Chris Sullivan:

Cool idea

Ryan Lowe:

The idea is great!

cayle ward:

hahaha i never excpected that ! thats good. the character still feels a little clunky. really dig into your arcs and try overlapping a few of the joints.

Senthilnathan D:

ha ha very nice ieda... good...

douglas anderson:

The situation is hilarious. And i really like him grabbing the hose at the end.

Janarthanan:

good effort..but idea is not imprusive...could have made the patient guy more funny..idea is not reachable...

Stephen Sues:

The knife isn't staged isn't staged quite clearly enough, and there doesn't seem to be any anticipation for the falling. He seems to just... fall.

Otherwise, pretty good. Like the use of the patient.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good upper body movement from
frame 18 to 118.

Avner Engel:

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poor little fellow in the middle. My only crit would be about the bloke on SL, he seems a bit too static for someone who's suppose to save lives.

Good work overall!

Jayesh J.Yatgiri:

Funny !

BigZ:

Looks fluid. could use a little bounce after the fall.

Omri Navot:

Awesome staging. Great gag. I didn't mark you down for this, but you should fix the penetration on the skirt geometry.

Sean Hannon:

good idea on the pulley rope. I think the fall should happen sooner to motivate the "whoop" exclamation,

Marco Palmieri:

camera is way too far out for us to apreciate the animation. the gag at the end is cute with the guy choking but the fall just isn't believable.

Patrice Lee Min Kam:

funny situation

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

lol... funny... the patient... i feel sorry for him..

Javier Vazquez:

hohooooo, man what a dangerous doctor, nice performance and idea

Ben Crouse:

Great idea for this scene. The patient's reaction to the dialogue is my favorite

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

haha love the concept, animation is very nice and fluent. The only thing i would to is to have the patient have a little more panic in his eyes, maybe look at the doctor then the tool he's holding in his hand. Great animation.

cheers
/ Chris

Paul Naas:

Good scenario, and funny resolution. The fall needs work, but overall pretty good.

Pete Shand:

great concept :) sync looked a bit off in the beginning

andyM:

like the gag, not sure the fall reads well though

Cole Higgins:

yeah awesome settup and acting choices. The bit at the end is great. Get some more animation in there. It feels a little unfinished. This piece has a great idea and its funny so that means its got a strong foundation to be a good portfolio pece. Spen some more time fleshing out the animtion.. Especially in the beg. He seems like hes still in the block stages.

Lisa Allen:

ahah funny! nice render too!

Roy Salamida:

i dont like operations da be creepins me out u no? i diggit bro

raman:


Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
good concept though

Virgil Tanasa:

interresting idea, but unfortunately the animation can't really hold it. there seems to be too much movement and poses aren't very clear for our main hero. also the viewer's attention is not really drawn to him, maybe staging problem? maybe posing problem?

Giuseppe:

A very nice idea! But the fall is not believable. A little delayed and not clearly anticipated. Very funny though!

David Thornfield:

staging...need to have this be more pushed in to the scene...can't clearly read what is happnenig...don't feel that his arms and legs are going to sleep though they need to collapse and be pulled down b gravity

Harry G:

Nice concept !! Timing was good except for the part when he falls.... was funny too !!

James Fearn-Wannan:

Ah har har har

Erik Westlund:

Interesting setup for showing a total lack of concern for the patients well being. Movements are a bit mechanical after the fall. Second surgeon seems mentally paralyzed and unable to act.