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Animator: Lisa Allen

Description: "what, a health problem?"! mr. norman doesnt like what he hears from the doc, and tries to show off that he can walk just fine, but ends up tripping them both up.

Experience: 4 months

Time taken: the whole month!

Comments:

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David Andrade:

That was pretty good, you have the fall realistic...but work on holding action a bit...it's getting there =)

Emmanuel Vergne:

Nice animation but with that kind of acting we (i) don't understand why he would say the lasts sentences : if nobody come to help him why does he have to say it ?

David Shum:

The falling and getting up part is good. In the first half of your piece, the character's movements feels really drifty, and late. You might want to check your lipsync too. Good piece none the less. Good job

Ryan Lowe:

The way he counter balances against that stool is awesome!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Ken Rice:

Nice animation - main character moves 100% of the time however - feels a little unnatural to me.

adolfo:

the one I saw in the WIP in the forum was better because the camera positiotn. By changing the point of view of the camera your animations saw more clear that way.

Avner Engel:

Nice fluidity in the bit where the shirtless guy gets up.

Alexandro Castro:

Seems like rotoscopy, need more cartoon style, exageration, etc... need spice.

Andrion Becker:

watch the arcs on those arms. At the moment they're feeling IKish

Senthilnathan D:

nice acting ... good....

Harry G:

Nice one... could still do alot better.

James Wilson:

great work.

the lip sync is off. over all it has a floaty swimmy feeling.the fall is nice

Pablo Piccione:

Nice flow. Mav by lyp sinc needs a liiittle bit more polishing..

Ian Johnston:

Really great, fluid movement when the character falls and takes the doctor with him. You could add a little more comedy with the two characters reacting to each other when they touch and then dropping them.

Mark Persson:

Good acting, lipsync and movement.

Keep up with the good work!D

Erik Westlund:

Nice fall. Has the right amount of violence to make its sudden occurrence disturbing. Nice touch including the rolling exam tray in his attempt to get up. Lip-sync looks a little rough and simple when compared with the rest of this animation.

Joe Jacob:

The guy getting up is done really well. Shows good sense of weight.

Stefano:

overall pretty good animation, the right leg pushing outward on frame 145 doesn't seem to work as well.

Miroslav Maletic:

Looks pretty good!
You need to work more on lipsync.
I like the falling part.

Marco Palmieri:

nice choice of camera angles. but feels a bit like the doctor has some issues with falling asleep too. maybe he could have been more alert when he falls. not bad though. :)

cayle ward:

HAHA funniest so far !! the offbalance part is nice, could use a bit more work, but the acting at the front needs to be minimized... cut out a few gestures and add some focus for the character, be sure to include some holds.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

floaty but good concept

BigZ:

I think this one needs some more polishing. Good job though.

Nate Lane:

awesome man! I think you handled this very well, but I think that it looks a bit "swimmy" right now. As I said in your WIP thread I think that adding some moving holds would serve you great! keep it up man! this is a very nice piece indeed!

Omri Navot:

Nice work, but the accents in your acting don't match the accents in the audio as well as they could.

Kevin Edzenga:

The guys hands and fingers when he's trying to get up are fantastic

Emilio Aguirre:

Nice decor. Love the detail. The chair can't support the weight of the pacient. And in frame 223 it moves by itself to reach the hand of the pacient.

Janarthanan:

good idea..the main guy is restless...always doin some kinda floaty actions..keep ur actions clear..

Stu Lloyd:

Haha, nice touch bringing the doctor down, very funny!

Niek Neervens:

it's nice how he grabds the stool to get up :) nice little detail

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think you've done a great job creating a sense of mass, with the chubby guy, especially.

Adam Conarroe:

It's good, but i think your lip syncing needs a little work. Try "popping" into your vowels more.

Christophe Mauceri:

i think you re acting need more expressivity. in the facials expressions

thomas reardon:

Lip sync needs more clarity but the action looks good.

Ben Crouse:

Good beginning. Probably could get away with fewer camera angles.

Roy Salamida:

doooood!! hahahahaha, that be so funny man. I cannot even believe, i really diggit!

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