Emmanuel Vergne:

it may be fun to do that much squash and stretch but i totally do not understand why i go this high when he falls... Is there a trampoline under him ?
The lipsync seems good (i mean the shapes) but the timing is off

Mike Courtney:

the large bounce to the ceiling is out of place

Cole Higgins:

mouth looks wierd

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting, lipsync and character movement.

But the fall with the sound isnt synchronized, the sound come before the fall.
You could also make the main character more drunk, could be quite nice!D

Keep up with the good work!D

Todd Kough:

Why does he character bounce off of the ceiling? I don't get that part.

eleazermunoz:

i really not sure how he falls like that.

Marco Palmieri:

his fall is totally over done! he's not made of rubber right? keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like the squash and stretch there..

BigZ:

good try. but need to control that stretch.

Carl Bérubé:

Woh... what a jump!?!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

To floaty and to much motion, the problem with to much motion is it's hard to focus what to look at and that confuses people. Love the Squash and stretch at frame 149 awesome, but I don't understand the jediforce that drives him upwards after the fall.

cheers
/ Chris

Omri Navot:

Your animation is technically good, but the story doesn't fit the dialogue at all.

Kevin Edzenga:

why does he fall and then come back up to hit his head on the bar and then fly into the air? His actions are just too much for me.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Stretch is a tool ! Not a solution !

Janarthanan:

is ther some kind of supernova explosion hapenning???y this much of exogeration in jump???also improve acting break symetry..folow basic principles..

Srdan:

I like the composition and placement of the characters. There is ofcourse a lot of things that you could improve. One thing when he falls down the "falling" does look kind of strange. It seems like he is draged upp in the sky at first and then falls down. Also the character dringing in the packground is great, he could have shown some reaction to the main guys fall.

Christopher Pelloux:

Not bad, you can still improve. The careless guy is pretty funny but when he drinks, it's too robotic...I like the exaggeration although I think it should be shorter in time.

Roy Salamida:

good shading! a little too liquidy in motion