Emmanuel Vergne:

i'm not a huge fan of the subjective view.
The acting seems good but i'd rather use the first camera all the sequence

Mike Courtney:

noticed some pops on both their heads

Cole Higgins:

its close but I feel that the bodies go a little dead at some points. Like when they both stop walking the person talking jjust sort of stops moving all together. His face doesnt move very much and in general his acting choices are just very tame. Push the acting and movement on those characters.

Pete Shand:

Nice stair fall :) he's looking a bit floaty tho

Marco Palmieri:

animation is ok. don't quite feel the emotion of the character and the camera choices are confusing. careful not to make the characters float around.

Shayne:

rock on.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

too floaty

Chris Peters:

In my opinion, there's no reason for POV shots for this dial. We don't need to be in Char B's head. It just feels lazy. There should be a reason behind everything, from a character's subtle eye dart, to a cam move. Keep at it =) Read Ollie Johnson, Stanchfeild etc

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Good animation, a bit swimy from time to time, try tighten up the shot some.

/ Chris

Omri Navot:

Interesting camera angle in the end. Great potential, but you have to push the acting on the characters a lot more, especially the facial.

Kevin Edzenga:

I like the pov convept you braught into this animation, but it didn't feel as point-of-view as you could have got it. More glacing around or head movement (secondary bobling) on walking down the steps could have assisted the shot.

But the animation didn't lead me to think there was anything wrong with his left arm due to him using it to try to stay on the stairs. If his hand bounced off the railing more, I would have believed it. Nice job.

Stu Lloyd:

Was that a woman with a man's voice?

Kevin Adams:

Things feel a bit floaty but I like your idea of falling down stairs.

Dave Poler:

Characters very stiff. Not much overlap. Expressions also a bit dead. Camera changes perspective and point of view too drastically.

Ben Crouse:

Looks good, but the facial expression could be pushed alot further!