Justin Weg:

Cool style

David Shum:

wow this looks great! I love the character too. One thing I didn't get was why he had his eyes closed at the end of the shot after he fell...

Mike Courtney:

You're not on model; the right elbow and shoulder appear and disappear. The fall should be faster and more exaggerated.

Cole Higgins:

the staging is a little funny. For the whole first have of the scene theres all that space to the right of him.. I think if it where at a more engaging angle it could spice it up a lot more.

Pete Shand:

Beautiful images, just a bit jittery with some of the animation

Javier Vazquez:

awesome!! nice appealing and style!!

Sean Hannon:

I love the 50's style to the animation. Not sure that the wiggly outline works for it though.

Marco Palmieri:

nice style. needs that little bit more polish to come through. Lip sync seems a bit out and not clear enough. :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

cool

Nate Lane:

haha I love the character. and I love the fact that you are doing 2D. respect brother! One thing that you maybe could do to improve this already great shot is to really give that cake some weight. Keep it up!!! You've really got skillz bro!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Look like the style in ratatuille, very nice animation some poses seems a bit of, especially the transition to them (frame 56) then after he settles he's shaking, good animation overall.

cheers
/ Chris

Lisa Allen:

nice character! but eek... broken leg at "and you wanna call it a health problem" his foot should be facing the other way.

Janarthanan:

good attempt...

thomas reardon:

Kind of strange when he bends forward, he should be starting to walk at that point.

Ben Crouse:

I like the style

Amdbcg:

good :) little bit stroby on the animation side of things