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Animator: daw yi

Description: This work has my own style and I hope it is a comportable acting.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: i did it when i was free

Comments:

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David Andrade:

Funny but im a litle lost, whats his character?

ryan Sowiak:

Love how you did the water!

Mike Courtney:

some of the poses could be stronger, don't make the W with the arms at the end

Ken Rice:

pretty good animation but I found the water at the end a bit distracting.

Cole Higgins:

yeah its a good start. Focus on getting the animation really smooth. Right now it seems very blocked and unfinished. Get a lot more keys in there and also push your facial animation more.. Its very reserved and hard to see his emotions.

Pete Shand:

Good work, the falls need a bit of work, the way he bounces he must weight as much as a table tennis ball, also the crutch snaps too quickly

Paul Naas:

That's one iffy fire hydrant! :0)

Sean Hannon:

The setup of the breaking hydrant makes it effectively the "gun" shown in the first act. You have to use it, and more than you did. It should interact with the main character more than it does.

Mark Persson:

Good acting and movement.

The idea needs to be polished.
Should the fire hydrant or the issue make the character fall? Both works, but still i wanna ask!
The movement and the lipsync does also need some work.

Keep up with good work!D

Jessie Baldwin:

Love your water FX'S!! Really smart idea!

Marco Palmieri:

need to work on that lip sync and the movement over the hydrant is not realy clear as to what is happening.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

that last pose doesnt look right...pretty good though

Shannon:

The animation itself is alright, but I'm not sure that the acting choices fit the dialogue.

Janarthanan:

funny idea..could have concentrated more on animation..

David Leighton:

I like the cartoony feel of this.
the way that the crutch is tossed away is too quick and the antic is unclear as to how its lost.

Roy Salamida:

why dere a seefrough plant under da hydrant bro?? hhaha, i diggit i want one

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