Health Problems
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Gregory Marlow:
Bad cut. was very confusing.
Mike Courtney:
good work
Sebastian Crossley-Zels:
good animation. Believe the camera work could be better but still think theres potential
Mark Persson:
Good acting and good camera angle after the fall!
Keep up with the good work!
Best!D
Marco Palmieri:
some nice animation in parts but need to have an original idea to sell this audio
Chris Peters:
moving the cam 2 frames and then cutting = bad. Really squash & S. that standing up/antic. Fall is pretty good. I'll bet you wouldn't do pushups on your 3rd knuckles =( Keep at it!
Carl Bérubé:
Very good, but we lose a lot of the poses when he turns around frame 137.
I'd also like to tell you that you could have kept the camera still.
Janarthanan:
bot lip sync and physical animation are not working wel..also the acting is not fine..hoping to see a good work next time..cheers.
Daniel H:
Tip 1: Loose the cut. I really think one camera should be enough for this clip.
Tip 2: He needs to push off the block a LOT harder with his one hand before he even starts to leave sitting on the block.
Comment 3: Beautiful work on the left arm, swings like it's broken. ;-)
Good good!
Amdbcg:
camera cuts on action - confuses audience
good animation though










Animator: Patrick Le Bayon
Description: First time with Maya
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 2 days