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Animator: Patrick Le Bayon

Description: First time with Maya

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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Gregory Marlow:

Bad cut. was very confusing.

Mike Courtney:

good work

Sebastian Crossley-Zels:

good animation. Believe the camera work could be better but still think theres potential

Mark Persson:

Good acting and good camera angle after the fall!

Keep up with the good work!
Best!D

Marco Palmieri:

some nice animation in parts but need to have an original idea to sell this audio

Chris Peters:

moving the cam 2 frames and then cutting = bad. Really squash & S. that standing up/antic. Fall is pretty good. I'll bet you wouldn't do pushups on your 3rd knuckles =( Keep at it!

Carl Bérubé:

Very good, but we lose a lot of the poses when he turns around frame 137.
I'd also like to tell you that you could have kept the camera still.

Janarthanan:

bot lip sync and physical animation are not working wel..also the acting is not fine..hoping to see a good work next time..cheers.

Daniel H:

Tip 1: Loose the cut. I really think one camera should be enough for this clip.

Tip 2: He needs to push off the block a LOT harder with his one hand before he even starts to leave sitting on the block.

Comment 3: Beautiful work on the left arm, swings like it's broken. ;-)

Good good!

Amdbcg:

camera cuts on action - confuses audience
good animation though

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