Adam Green:

Clever idea!

Gregory Marlow:

Very cool idea.

Eren Saritas:

i love the idea cong. :)

Emmanuel Vergne:

the overall rhythm is too slow i think.
Try to break the rhythm sometimes

Mike Courtney:

nice concept. the handler's reaction doesn't work because the conversation has been going on for a few seconds by the time he drops the marionette

Ken Rice:

Nice animation, but the fall doesn't appear to sync with the sound and the urgency after the fall I feel isn't displayed by the puppeteer.

Cole Higgins:

coool idea. theres a lot of scene changes so theres not really enough time for me to enjoy the animation. On the scenes where there is some animation like when hes standing up spend a little more time fleshing it out. Its almost there but needs a little more time .

Pete Shand:

great idea!

Paulo Cesar Biajante:

great idea!

Ian Johnston:

Wow. Really creative premise with a nice surprise for the final delivery.

Not Available:

Love the concept.

Stefano:

That's a really funny idea!

Jr Prez:

a bit of overlap could add more fluidity

eleazermunoz:

when do the strings get detached?

Marco Palmieri:

Interesting concept and natural motion. But i don't think it makes sense who is in control of the lims and why he falls. Not bad.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

cool idea. but way too floaty... the get up was ok

Chris Peters:

nice situational element. fall needs to happen faster.

Omri Navot:

Good animation, but the facials on the puppeteer aren't clear to me. Also, why does he drop the marionette?

Maya K:

Great concept!

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Great idea ! But wire must lead each mouvements

Janarthanan:

good idea..but could have made it even more better..

Michael Tyler Heckman:

love the gag

Ben Crouse:

haha, funny concept!
crit - timing of the fall with the audio seems off

Cay:

love the concept, much more imaginative than a character falling over for the sake of the piece. More anticipation between the puppeteer's yawn then reaction to the talking puppet would be nice, at the moment I find the actions too similar. The lip sync and facial features could be pushed more on "and YOU wanna call it a health problem", seeing he does so at the end. Great piece of work though!

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio.

good concept though