Cole Higgins:

I dont really feel any thought process, just looks like hes moving to the dialogue. Have the action come from the inside out. Right now it feels as though hes only moving becasue there are words there.

Emilio Aguirre:

Look like the head in passing thru the floating object between frame 151 and 153

eleazermunoz:

his head goes though the bed..

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

its alittle floaty... and that bounce on the floor makes him look like rubber.. heads arent that bouncey

Shannon:

Some really nice poses in here, but the timing could be tightened up. Also, his pelvis just locks to floor on his final fall.

cayle ward:

great idea ! just needs some more work thats all.... maybe some study of linguini... or even some jim carrey maybe

douglas anderson:

I thought the poses were great, but I think you need to improve the timing on the fall, seems a little slow, but the bounce on the head feels really good.

Pete Shand:

Needs a bit more work getting the timing right.

daw yi:

no contradistinguish

Marco Palmieri:

some good weight and motion but the poses and expressions need work. keep it up :)

Chris Peters:

Where's the overlap on the bouncing R hand at the end? Keep at it!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Paulo Cesar Biajante:

great poses!

Ben Crouse:

one of the more believable (and funny) falls i've seen. good work!

Simon Paquette:

your idea works, fun poses and balancing stuff going on in the first half!
Acting needs a lot of work though, and solid body mechanics are a MUST for a pantomime-heavy scene like this.

keep it up!

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio

Mark Persson:

Good acting and character movement!

The leaning at the bed feels wrong. You need to polish the fall, i think. It comes to gradual.

Keep up with the good work!D

Emmanuel Vergne:

i really like the idea of the character falling gradually, not in one time