Simon Paquette:

fun acting in the beginning, but maybe a black background isn't the best choice if you're moving the camera around... the reach(for his falling arm) and fall feel pretty forced; try not to get too attached to an idea in your head, instead act it out a little and focus on what looks and feels believable.

keep it up!

Emmanuel Vergne:

i really like the pose at frame 24 : it really made me laugh.
Funny idea, it works very well.
The only thing is that without any ground, we don't really understand the camera movement : there is only a character that moves in front of a black background. A really simple plane would do the job

David Shum:

Good job thinkin out side the box ;)

Ryan Lowe:

Hahaha. That was pretty original. Maybe you could add more motion after the fall?

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Cole Higgins:

hey thats great. Nice idea good acting. its funny. Though its not in the wow thats really good. Work on grabing the audience with just amazing acting and beautiful animation.. Right now its a little jerky and not very fluid. I think that prevents it from being great!!! keep going.

Bader Badruddin:

nice concept

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting and character movement!

The arm thing is a good idea, but it needs something more. dont know what... but something is missing!

Best!D

eleazermunoz:

like the uses of the little sound in the clip.

Marco Palmieri:

some nice animation. the arm falling off is not fitting with the idea though. kind of detracts from it all. keep it up though :)

cayle ward:

its got some great poses ! I think it could use a nice spline pass. Also, the eye movement after the character has hit the ground, its not reading. The eyes are one thing you want iron grip control over, and you have to be vary careful about any movement you give em.

Simon Taylor:

Pretty good movement! There's a sort of "woaah ooohohhh" sound in the dialogue (around 180 frames in) though which doesn't get reflected in the animation. Like the idea tho with the arm falling off!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

good stuff...

rushang:

which has been talking that man .... and why he wastalking alone....

Emilio Aguirre:

Like falling arm, nice touch!

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Good idea !

thomas reardon:

When he is saying "I don't need your help" he really should be trying to get up and regain control of his body.

Ben Crouse:

whoah his arm fell off!

Roy Salamida:

arm "falls asleep" .. doesn't fall off. weird idea. a background would be nice also.