The Patient

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Animator: Deepth azeez

Description: This patinet is too overconfident
and never admit his disabilities at
any stage.

Experience: 3 yrs

Time taken: 6 to 7 days

Comments:

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Patricia Ross:

There's some really nice animation here. I think when he says 'my legs' it looks a bit more like he's looking at his screen left hand. The crutch fall is a little slow as is the guy's fall. But with a little more time this could be a rock solid piece. Nice job!

Emmanuel Vergne:

Good idea to have the stand fall and then him fall too trying to catch it.
But the rhythm seems too even all the time

David Shum:

Lipsync is off. Your movements feels pretty natural. Good job

Mike Courtney:

the arm goes through the crutch at 109, fall needs work

adolfo:

I like it. It is generally pretty good. Perhaps the fall is to slow. and the second man also is slow in motion.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good work on the hand interaction
from frame 204 to 244.

Avner Engel:

Feels a little bit too floaty and weight less.

Sean Hannon:

Starts off well, but the second half looks floaty and not timed well with the sound

Mark Persson:

Good acting and movement!

It needs be polished more. i think it could be better if you zoom in a bit.
The fall doesnt work with sound!

Keep up with good work!

Joe Jacob:

Really smooth and realized body movements.

sachin:

need more details

Marco Palmieri:

Expressions need to more clear and camera seems to far out. Needs to be snappier!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the fall seemed to cg'ish and he bounced as if he were rubber.. i doubt he is..

Nate Lane:

sweet! My only crit would be that the audio of the fall doesn't really time correctly with the fall. Keep it up :D

Janarthanan:

good idea..coul have made it even more better at last..patient falling is too slow..could have made it more funny..and the doctor guy seems to stand dead..

Christopher Pelloux:

Really good animation

Roy Salamida:

it goes through his arm and kind of floats... keep up the work though :)

Daniel H:

Awesome, best one I've seen in the set yet. There are a few things you might want to polish, though.

Right after frame 175, I'd like to see his upper body come down toward his knees instead of staying above, that would really help sell that it has weight, and it came down hard.

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio

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