Mike Courtney:

nice work

Chris Niewinski:

Kinda of confusing when he falls. Hard to tell what makes him fall.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good reaction from the second
character after she gets out of the
chair.

Cole Higgins:

yeah its really close. I would say the part that bothers me is the fact that his hips harldly move at all. they seem to lock into place as his upper boddy is moveing quite a lot. Loosen up those hips and get them feeling just a little more wieghty and have some miature smooth arcs in there as well. Really nice acting choices. I love the bit with the hat.

Mark Persson:

Good acting and character movement!

The fall feels wrong some how. It goes to fast i think. hmmm... it looks like he is pulled forward-down. Take away this forward thing and let only the gravity pull him down!?

Keep up with good work!

Erik Westlund:

Nice props and environment to setup gag. Nice weight demonstrated in jump from exam table and in slide at the end. Quoting hand gesture is a little unfortunate in acting choice. Onset of paralysis seems completely arbitrary despite anticipation pose.

Marco Palmieri:

1st 3rd is ok. the jump off is good, but the overall animations needs more weight ans snappiness to make it work. facial expressions need allot of work. keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

aww. .darn.. the beginning part was really good.. then the major downfall when he falls.. the fall looked kidna fake, the walk needs alittle more weight... but darn.. i repeat.. i like the 1st part of the animation.. good effort...

Nate Lane:

Nice poses man. You have some really nice flow as well. My only crit would be that the sound of him falling doesn't match up with what you have. Fix that up and this will be an excellent piece for sure :D

Chris Peters:

I like the hop down, hat on. The "you wanna" pose is akward. "C" curves!!! You have the oppertunity to go from "(" on "go to sleep" to ")"

Omri Navot:

Good start. Needs some polish.

YatiYati:

Dude add more strong poses...and have to work on arc also.....

Janarthanan:

need improvemnt in acting part..normal acting idea..

JAEHYUN PARK:

Pretty good...but I have no idea how he fell down. It doesn't make sense to me...sorry, maybe I'm so tired...

LizZ:

I love the floor wiggle. And the air quotes are a great touch.

thomas reardon:

Less body snap when he gets off the bed. More movement of his overall body to gear up for the fall.

Dave Poler:

Nice timing. Expression is a little dead and when his limbs go to sleep it seems more like some external force is acting on him instead of his limbs just dying out. Camera movement also is distracting.

Roy Salamida:

Too much work put into how it looks... it looks very nice, but it needs work on the mechanics. I'd like to see more from you though :-)

David Thornfield:

I like it up to the fall...doesn't feel like the legs are going to sleep...feels too dileberate...he stops I think he should be still moving his torso but his legs just buckle and collapse and he falls down....