Gregory Marlow:

Why was that camera move necessary? I think its just distracting.

Ryan Lowe:

Most of the motion is pretty good. I don't think you need the camera move though.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Michael Van Alstine:

Nice camera work.

Cole Higgins:

nice set up and stage, lighting and all around finished looking product. The animation is looking pretty good but at points it feels clunky and a little to fast.. Like his left arm at one point looks a little akward the way it moves. Your on the right track but get the animation a little more fluid and smooth.

Pete Shand:

Looks good. The recoil at 30 might be a little much.

Paul Naas:

Man, if you'd just delayed the hop off the examining table until the fall happens, you'dve had it!

Sean Hannon:

The rise on the whoop seems odd since it suggests leg muscles working, not the loss of control.

Mark Persson:

Good acting and camera view!

All movement are good but the main character have some twitch when he speaking. If you smoothen them out i think it would be better.
The camera view i think are losing its point after the fall on the floor. if you could change it more to the main character.

Best!D

Jr Prez:

wrong choice of camera position, we don't see half of your shot

Marco Palmieri:

some nice bits, but over all it just didn't move naturally.

cayle ward:

at the start you have three big moves in a row.. its unnessesarry.. pick one and go with that. in this case i would pick the accent on "...and YOU..." from there on everything seems to be played quite nicely!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

good camera shot.. pretty good

nadja kapeller:

i like the energetic way of speaking...

Marcio Bukowski:

don´t move your camera too much

Shannon:

Good, but the staging at the head of the shot hides the speaker's arm and creates some odd silhouettes.

Janarthanan:

lot of floatiness!!

Christopher Pelloux:

Good animation

thomas reardon:

Get rid of the camera move, tone down the backgound light. His hand gesture at the end needs more expressiveness. Doctor putting clipboard down looks good.

Ben Crouse:

Snappy timing - I would have liked to see what happened when he hit the floor though!

William:

Smarf was on the thundrcats

David Thornfield:

need more overlap in arms and heads...too stiff animation right now

Amdbcg:

love the camera on this!
also, good curves! love the animation - feels natural - almost looks like a blooper from a pixar film ... (well, animation wise, anyways)