An Active Puppet
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Jr Prez:
really fluide but no lipsync which is part of the fun
Emilio Aguirre:
The strings pass thru the head and the body! This should not happen.
Ryan Lowe:
I love the dancing!
Hahaha.
eleazermunoz:
all most there with the movement the string done not look like they are pulling him but he is pushing them where he wants to go.
Marco Palmieri:
He's all over the place! need to work on your poses.
cayle ward:
was that roto? or did u use comparison reference... its a good choice though..that small sequence is probly my favorite of almost all time !! keep working at it, and try using live action reference as well !
Michael Van Alstine:
Good marionette body movements.
Sean Hannon:
Nice dance work in the first part but the fall is not convincing
Mike Courtney:
looks like the strings keep going in and out of the blue man's body
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
haha
Kensaba:
I like the idea, keep going.
Victoria Alexander:
If you aren't going to move that red character at all, just take him out of the shot entirely.
Cole Higgins:
work with the camera angle a little more. pick something a little more engaging. Also work on getting your animation more smooth. right now its a little jerky.
Brad Wright:
Um...why is he dancing?
Amdbcg:
needs rendering :P
motion isn't fluid - check your curves - smooth them out
also, the sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
David Shum:
Ahahha, first piece that got me to laugh out loud so far. Thanks









Animator: Bilal Ahmad
Description: i really really wish i could work more and refine this piece, BUT even then please guys, let me know your comments.
Experience: still learning
Time taken: 4-5 hours