An Active Puppet

Final Rating: 3.13. Finished: 79 out of 92 entries.
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Animator: Bilal Ahmad

Description: i really really wish i could work more and refine this piece, BUT even then please guys, let me know your comments.

Experience: still learning

Time taken: 4-5 hours

Comments:

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Jr Prez:

really fluide but no lipsync which is part of the fun

Emilio Aguirre:

The strings pass thru the head and the body! This should not happen.

Ryan Lowe:

I love the dancing!
Hahaha.

eleazermunoz:

all most there with the movement the string done not look like they are pulling him but he is pushing them where he wants to go.

Marco Palmieri:

He's all over the place! need to work on your poses.

cayle ward:

was that roto? or did u use comparison reference... its a good choice though..that small sequence is probly my favorite of almost all time !! keep working at it, and try using live action reference as well !

Michael Van Alstine:

Good marionette body movements.

Sean Hannon:

Nice dance work in the first part but the fall is not convincing

Mike Courtney:

looks like the strings keep going in and out of the blue man's body

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

haha

Kensaba:

I like the idea, keep going.

Victoria Alexander:

If you aren't going to move that red character at all, just take him out of the shot entirely.

Cole Higgins:

work with the camera angle a little more. pick something a little more engaging. Also work on getting your animation more smooth. right now its a little jerky.

Brad Wright:

Um...why is he dancing?

Amdbcg:

needs rendering :P
motion isn't fluid - check your curves - smooth them out
also, the sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio

David Shum:

Ahahha, first piece that got me to laugh out loud so far. Thanks