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Animator: Francisco Martin

Description: a man trying to make things by himself

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks in free times

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Fernando Herrera:

Nice!

Just needs to push some poses further. Like on the first one he's pretty much straight up to the camera. Besides that maybe just work more on the lip sync and facial.

Emmanuel Vergne:

Niiice !
Good rhythm, good idea/interpretation
There is just the first pose of the main character that i don't really like : we see him too much from front.
And i would fix the same character a little more, not having him moving all the time

Mike Courtney:

like it, the green suit is going up and down a bit too much on the walk over to help

Ken Rice:

Really nice animation - good detail and floppy limbs. The only thing I would say is that I think it would look a tad better if you weren't looking dead on at the left character: his seated silhouette isn't too good.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good interaction between the two
characters at the end.

Cole Higgins:

really nice wieght!!! its really good but somehting bothers me. His body movements are really great but I dont really feel the emotions in his face. His face is not very animated. He sort of looks really pissed off but I dont quite get that from the dialogue. Great effort.

Pete Shand:

Nice solid animation, seems a bit floaty around the 140 area

Sean Hannon:

Nice dynamic action with the tray, and I like the time you spent developing the second character.

David Trudel:

Funny, your idea is very similar to mine but I lacked time to finish it. Your animation is very good, the only thing is maybe the mouth is a little bit 'offsync'. Good job, I like it!

Mark Persson:

Very good idea, acting, character movement. Very good flow into everything! It feels they are both alive!D

Extra: very good lightning and color. it feels soft and nice!

You should create your own character than using this finished rig character. It would make it perfect!

Best!D

Sergey B.:

That is really good en funny i love it
Congrats :D

Erik Westlund:

Nice weight demonstrated with hand on bed and flipping props on tray. Collapsing on floor looses energy too quickly. Facial animation needs more contrast instead of staying on pretty much the same note for most of the performance.

Jr Prez:

kind of weird the doctor's walk

eleazermunoz:

man in green movement a bit ruff

Marco Palmieri:

some good weight and motion but the poses and expressions need work. keep it up :)

Stefan Trifunovic:

I like it. It's really great.
I think at the beginning the secondary character could have better silhouette.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

good mechanics

Kevin Edzenga:

I like this one alot, only thing really that I see is on the doctor, everything about his animation I like except for when he calls for assistance by waving, the timing is perfect, but I feel like the hand doesn't have any weight / too stiff.

nadja kapeller:

like it

Stephen Sues:

My only complaint is that the lips seem very out of synch.

Otherwise, this is great. The limpness of the limbs is believable and comical, and the tray flying away is a great touch.

What I like best, though, is the fact that you had the doctor act, and not just stand there until the last 4 seconds.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Great ! Good Details and arm character's appear really asleep

Stu Lloyd:

I love the feeling of dead weight in the limbs, very smooth animation!

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like that .. the lip sync is a bit out but, by and large, I think you've done a good job.

LizZ:

I can't tell if its just cause its playing over the web or maybe its off a frame, but the lipsync fells a frame or so slow in the first section.

Ben Crouse:

well done. I love the gag with the tray flying off! hehe

Daniel H:

Awesome!

Only comment? When green guy waves, it's very harsh. Try a softer-edged/wilder-shake overshoot.

David Thornfield:

nurse or doctor stiff with the arm wave

Amdbcg:

great lighting! also, there's a reason for his falling :)
love it!
the only problem I can tell is the lip syncing is slightly off -
good job (you're the first person I've seen with a good animation! )

jamil:

nice weight on the arm and the body falling down.

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