...Health Problem......

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Animator: Sako Mahamadou

Description: ......but i want to play......

Experience: one good year

Time taken: 2 weeks (have not enough timeT_T)

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Fernando Herrera:

This is nice!
Poses, acting, body mechanics and facial expressions working great.

I only wish that you had closer cameras

Emmanuel Vergne:

the way the character falls is too smooth, too slow
But nice animation

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Cole Higgins:

nice effort working with three characters. Though they all seem a little underanimated. MAybe on your next pass or next scene pick one character and just animate the hell out of it. Really get it nice, fluid and smooth.

Matt Tovar:

good stuff . like the idea..maybe the coach should be holding the ball initially.
and I love the Spurs jersey, GO SPURS GO!!!!!

Pete Shand:

Like the concept and animation, the lips are off though which prove to be really distracting.

Javier Vazquez:

woow, dificult performance but nice

Paul Naas:

Great idea. Love the scenario, and well executed.

Sean Hannon:

not certain I understand the action. Anyone would have fallen over backwards trying to catch the ball that was flung so high.

Erik Westlund:

Another creative alternative to the is audio. Thanks for avoiding the 'medical exam' theme. Nice contrast between two main characters of player in denial and angry coach. I like the dismissive quality you portray in the line "And You want to call it a health problem." Hand in the air as he lies on the ground is lost a little due to chair blocking the pose... too many similar vertical lines.

Todd Kough:

Lip sync seems to be off by about a frame. Also you might want to have the coach do more of an action to request the incoming ball and exaggerate the acceptance on the catch just a little more.

Marco Palmieri:

Could have cut in for a short moment to see his expressions better. then move out for the gag. well animated though and nice concept. :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the lip sync is off... the guy at the left side is really still.. he should be moving alittle

Nate Lane:

haha very funny. I love your unique idea! only crit is that the lip syncing isnt very strong. I think that you don't have the jaw opening and closing enough to sell it. No, you don't need everysingle word in there of course, but a few more mouth poses and you'll be golden :D

Keep it up!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Good clean animation, great work.

Kris Staber:

love the trainer
maybe him catching the ball could be set up better in terms of leading the eye

pratik virash:

too sttif.

Shannon:

Really nice. The fall can be snappier; not really feeling the impact right now.

Janarthanan:

y is that guy flying like a feather????also too much of head jurks...most of the expressions in falling guy is not registering..

Mathew Burniston:

I don't understand why he falls?

JAEHYUN PARK:

Cool. I like your Body actions. but I think your Lipsync is little bit off and not very visible for me. and the guy needs more weight when he jump back.

Peter Satera:

It's nice, it would be cool to see him direct his legs when he mentions them, the basket ball throw is also a little too fast, the ball seems a little too light. I love it when he says the word problem.

:)

Amdbcg:

love it!

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